oh cabin

oh cabin, my cabin! our monthlong sprint is done,
our group has sampled every plot, some writ, edit, and won,
The plot so dear, cliched I fear, the characters revolting,
These hollow lines not ready yet, this draft needs trim and sparing;
now to edit! edit! edit!
oh sweet bleeding drops of red,
where on the shelf my novel lies,
unfinished and unread

About Brad Werner

Technical Evangelist
This entry was posted in poetry and tagged . Bookmark the permalink.

3 Responses to oh cabin

  1. Mesnard says:

    I hope you fared well in your cabin and with you novel progress.


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s